Evan Ray Jones III
Premise: Snotball and the search for the golden fire hydrant in the ancient Pet store.
Sentence 1: A car pulls up, and door slides open, suddenly pair of furry paws appear. It is Snotball the adventure seeking pup. Standing in front of the ancient Pet store.
Sentence 2: A voice comes from inside the car, “All right Snotball now I’ll be back in a few minutes so be back with the golden fire hydrant.” Snotball is then off on her adventure.
Sentence 3: Snotball opens the stone store doors to find the golden fire hydrant in the distance. With a devilish smile on her face and with a step forward, suddenly the ground gives way stopping our hero right her furry tracks.
Sentence 4: Seeing this Snotball then starts to look around for something to use. Seeing a bin of leashes she grabs one attaching it to a water pipe and swings across. Only to realize that she doesn’t have thumbs while half way she slips but just in time to catch the nearby ledge. Scrambling to get up she continues on her way.
Sentence 5: Snotball continues her tip toeing over to the Golden fire hydrant unable to shake the feeling something strange is a foot. Upon reaching the golden fire hydrant Snotball braces herself but to realize that she was wasting time. Grabbing the fire hydrant only to hear it sweak to her joy, she starts to feel the ground shake underneath her paws.
Sentence 6: Snotball then looks up to see what suddenly appears to be a giant hair ball coming toward her with great speed. Before Snotball can even move the giant hair ball is already on top of her. As it rolls towards the door Snotball says in a discussing tone. "Ewe, it’s in my fur, it’s in my fur."
Sentence 7: As the giant hair ball rolls down the rows and rows of aisles it finally hits the door sending Snotball flying through the air. Making her landing right in front of the car door. Now soaking wet and breathing heavily she enters the car and it drives off. "Brother, next time we're ordering it off the paw net."
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2 comments:
Oh! The toy squeak is in here! ^_^
This holds together a lot better than what I heard in class. Sounds like you've got your work cut out for you!
An idea that just popped into my head: the ancient pet store could have the facade of some ancient ruin but with a big pawprint sign or something. Lol, I don't know how good the idea is, but I found it kinda cute so I figured I'd type it.
Thanks, I was thinking of making the ancient pet store temple called, Sweaks R Us. I thought it would be funny and the paw idea on the door is a good one I like that idea it sounds very cool and in photoshop it would be simply to create. Anyway it is a lot better since she told me to go with the Indiana Jones theme idea. I still if this thing becomes longer will make it with the quater and a few other ideas to help make it more dramatic at times.
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